User blog comment:A, Mori/This is based off of that one chapter from Dr. Sand/@comment-1917722-20151222192834

I've noticed this new type of format and it seems a possible thing to use for future rewrites, honestly. Especially with the colours being involved in the dialogues.

Also, nice way of giving more body to an otherwise relatively simple event (at least, nothing complex happens here and yet there's plenty to tell about it).