Talk:The Kuipter Files: A Ludusian Crisis/@comment-16075172-20150428153450

So I'm thinking about possible changes to this now:
 * I may want to change some parts so that Kuipter was in orbit around Ludus for just over a month before the events of the current first chapter, so that a lot of his experiments beforehand would have time to develop for more recent attacks that he does.
 * I also want to do something where Mura knew about the previous thing because Kuipter had been contacting him for a while, but he hadn't revealed his true intentions until that day, so that he could get things from Mura. (This could very well be the explanation for the birth of Eos, for one, possibly by saying that Mura gave him a sample of C-Tree's DNA.)
 * I also might want to make a chapter before the current first chapter that's narrated by Kuipter and just explains that he's there and that he and his forces are planning and that he really hates his brothers.