User blog comment:A, Mori/Ludus History Idea/@comment-1713909-20140920012232/@comment-3126873-20140922221736

Seeing as we've already got some snazzy art to accompany the story I don't think it's good for ditching.

As I've mentioned before, my only issues are with the beginning and the passing-of-knowledge. The natives of Ludus are not very technologically advanced and Ludus is a very unknown planet with mediocre resource spoils, so perhaps it could have been something with the witches just being the new worship-fad instead of the traditional gods. And again, the people that the witches chose to pass their knowledge to are really just there because they're important characters and we need a tie-in, and it's been established that Hank is basically a know-all godly worker and that Canonicrine was a bestiary-writer-guy prior to his settling. (And Zoshi was a prince so I guess they taught him this bunk in prince school.) I think maybe we could make use of the chosen ancestors trope in having them pass their knowledge on to Sanford, Ivan247 or Doctor Seaweed, and Godzilla or whoever Canonzoshi looks up to.

The curse of invasion is super-grandular, though, because there's really no reason as to Ludus' constant invasion other than misfortune/dibbing of the protagonists.

/end second review