Talk:The Kuipter Files: A Ludusian Crisis/@comment-16075172-20150331142826/@comment-3126873-20150331191049

Alright, so let's stop all sorts of train wrecks before they begin and all.


 * The story will need to begin prior to the Finale story, as we can't just shove incoming readers into "okay so Kuipter is a bad guy and we gotta stop him".
 * In ideas that I've had of the rewrite, it would serve as an introduction to all of the main characters, even if not the first story by production order or chronology.
 * Also, my idea would introduce the authority/police force of Ludus just to show that they can't do things on their own, explaining why LDZX has to step in to solve their problems. Dunno if anyone wants to go with that but I did have some scenes planned and all for when I got to that.
 * Kole, Koala, Ellona. Can we finalize details on them please?
 * Kole was the pet koala of Mercedes and was inexplicably turned into a that-one-horror-doll-meets-173 duder. That's a stupid idea and I want to get rid of it, thanks.
 * Koala is an earthquake demon and he needs a proper backstory. I'll deal with redesigns to his figure myself, if that's alright.
 * As I've expressed before, Ellona's involvement with the story is a poor replacement of Vriska's past involvement in the story, which was a bad idea. So it was a bad idea replacing a bad idea. Voting to scrap her out of the story because she makes her own character, Canonicrine's character, and to an extent Revelian's character look like idiots.

I hope this is worded alright but I'll be around to clarify if needed.